The design you propose is very sculptural and daring just like your early concept models were. At the same time there is something “mechanical” about the character of your proposal. I understand that this was your intention all along and I think that you were very successful in carrying many of the qualities of the work you did at the beginning of the semester in your final design!
The exhibit spaces on the ground level that you propose are fantastic! Well done for showing this in your renderings (your 3rd board with the 4 perspectives is my favorite). The people and cars that you added in your drawings have made a difference in the presentation. I still have questions about the idea of having cars on the ramps - you have them on your plans but not on your sections so this may tell you something.
Your presentation boards are nicely made and well organized. On one of your site plans (earlier) I did notice that you showed with straight lines parts of the building that are curved. Be careful with little things like these because they can affect the coherence of your presentation. Bravo for the animations!
Well done and good luck with whatever you do next.
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Hello, Pedro.
ReplyDeleteThe design you propose is very sculptural and daring just like your early concept models were. At the same time there is something “mechanical” about the character of your proposal. I understand that this was your intention all along and I think that you were very successful in carrying many of the qualities of the work you did at the beginning of the semester in your final design!
The exhibit spaces on the ground level that you propose are fantastic! Well done for showing this in your renderings (your 3rd board with the 4 perspectives is my favorite). The people and cars that you added in your drawings have made a difference in the presentation. I still have questions about the idea of having cars on the ramps - you have them on your plans but not on your sections so this may tell you something.
Your presentation boards are nicely made and well organized. On one of your site plans (earlier) I did notice that you showed with straight lines parts of the building that are curved. Be careful with little things like these because they can affect the coherence of your presentation. Bravo for the animations!
Well done and good luck with whatever you do next.
Best Regards
Phanos Ionides